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Good day, everyone. I'm so glad you could be here because today I have something so special to show you.

Have you ever felt tired? Have you ever felt like things were just spinning a bit out of control and that you really needed a break? In fact, I think we both know that's true sometimes! Doesn't someone like you deserve to take well earned vacation to a fabulous destination? I mean, who wouldn't just like to get a way for a while? Well, you're in luck today, because my friends, you have shown up just in time! Today, and today only, I am offering an absolutely unbeatable get away package to the world's most remarkable city, Edmonton, Alberta! But, that's not all, just wait until you hear about what you'll get on your fabulous vacation; and the best part? All you have to do is remember: you don't have to try, just fly!

Now, I know what you're thinking, "How can I afford a fabulous get away to beautiful Edmonton?" You've probably been around shopping for other trips only to find that the price is just sky high! So don't even think about the price right now, because what I'm offering up is better than a great price, it's a great value! You don't have to try, just fly! I know you're going to love it!

Your fabulous get away will start in style with two tickets aboard Air Canada's finest passenger jet, the A330. On board, you'll experience the hospitality you'd expect from their in-flight service professionals; and recent release movies are available whenever you ask for them! What could be better than that? When you arrive in Edmonton, transportation to your hotel will be a snap to find, literally! Just snap your fingers and a fleet of cabs will be available to serve you.

Now, I know, it all sounds too good to be true, and that the journey sounds like the best part, but wait, because there's more. You'll be staying at the well appointed and luxurious 3 star Holiday Inn Express in the heart of Downtown Edmonton. Worried about breakfast? Don't be! A complimentary bowl of cereal and slice of toast comes with every night's stay! Of course, you'll be waited on by the hotel's friendly staff who can tell you where to go and what to see.

Speaking of things to see in Edmonton, you've never seen anything like West Edmonton Mall. It's one of the world's largest shopping malls! No kidding. I know you're thinking it's probably not that big, after all, how could you afford to go to such a fabulous place, but you can; and when you get there you'll be treated to more than eight hundred amazing retail outlets that can meet every pleasure, every taste, and anything your heart desires! Want clothes? They've got that! Want food? They've got that too! Want a tattoo to remember your fabulous get away? Get one! Whatever you can demand, West Edmonton Mall can offer! But if you're more interested in sights than shopping, hop the #1 bus back downtown and spend some time on a guided tour of the beautiful Mutart Conservatory! Nestled in Edmonton's remarkable river valley, the Conservatory offers you four distinct biomes of flora to explore! how do they do it? Each biome is separate environment covered with one of a kind glass pyramids. Take a romantic stroll or just relax on one of their custom benches! You don't have to try, just fly!

Now, I know you're probably already convinced, but you're probably thinking that a trip like this is going to cost you thousands of dollars. Well this trip isn't going to cost you thousands of dollars! It's not like those other trips that will have you traveling to strange and dangerous countries at a price only a fool would pay! For this fabulous get away to Edmonton, all this value, you'll pay only $1495. That's right! Airfare, five nights at the amazing Holiday Inn Express in Downtown Edmonton, the shopping spree at West Edmonton Mall, and an afternoon at the Mutart Conservatory, all for only $1495. That's a $5000 value for only $1495! Also, if you book right now, I'll be able to include two absolutely free tickets to the World Water Park at West Edmonton Mall! That's right! Airfare, five nights at the amazing Holiday Inn Express in Downtown Edmonton, the shopping spree at West Edmonton Mall, an afternoon at the Mutart Conservatory, and two absolutely free tickets to the World Water Park, all for the incredible value of only $1495 if you book now! You don't have to try, just fly!